First glimpse

Still working on Delphinium, but really happy how it’s turning out. Several plot lines are braiding together nicely. I think it’ll be long enough to satisfy the ‘Larkspur was too short’ group, and better paced than Larkspur.

Here’s the first paragraph:

She had become ill. A cough that began the day of their departure and lasted throughout the journey, bringing with it chills and taking away her appetite. Three days from the duchy of Piques they stopped to rest at a town, her suitor refusing to go further until she improved. As his orders were that of duc and doctor there were few who could argue, and none of them present.

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